ESL Advanced Reading and Writing - the REAL deal :)

And yet, again, from a student's essay on negative effects of computers on children:
"The Internet is a complicated place (!) flood with lots of violence and pornography."

OMG, I'm CRYING:
"The base contents in the internet will cause mental problems (!) among children."

"If a student needs to research information for school, they merely access a relevant site and download the computer (!!!)"
Apparently, there is some new technology concealed from ordinary people :)) call it 'magic'?

from a student's essay (harmful effects computers may have on children):
to fully appreciate the line - context the sentence is taken from: "Children can easily access dangerous websites."
"...they may get curious about sex. More so, they may copy what they see, and if they are trying to have sex, probably the panther (omg!) will be the close to their age."

more about computers:
"Computers have harmful radiations that can clown (o_O) human brain and this clowning (!) results to brain disability to think (omg..), specially, the harmful radiation may cause nausea, lose hair, skin illness, in addition, over using computer will affect children's eyesight."
Are you still staring at the screen?!... Ruuuuun before you become a funny bald mentally disabled clown!

from a student's essay. Topic: "Why do some friendships end?"
"The third reason for spoiling friendship (!) is temptation (!). [...] They {temptations] can be money, porn (!), and power."
I just love the word choice! :)

same paper: "Getting new friends, hiding (!), and temptations (!) all can be the reasons of abortion (!) of friendship."