Friday, December 10, 2010

from a student's writing journal

"Describe the place where you grew up."

I describe the place 42 street "Grand Central Terminal". The Grand Central Terminal is the place when the all tren pass [where all the trains pass]. They Place are very beautiful is big also, is the best terminal on Manhattan.
[and so on and so forth with the description]
...
I talk for that Place because is the best and beautiful Place.

Poor girl! Growing up at a train station must have been tough, but she managed to keep her high spirits and positive attitude. Anyhow, her warm feelings towards her motherland arouse admiration.

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